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根據下面的圖畫,請你用英語寫一篇短文,大約包括6~9個句子,短文要求達意,正確、連貫.短文開頭已給出.
It's seven o'clock in the evening.
學生:習作: It's seven o'clock in the evening. Tom's family is(X1) all at home. Tom is listening to the music. His sister is playing(X2) a cat. His father is reading a book, His mother is making a telephone call with(X3) somebody. His grandparents are watching TV. There is a picture and a clock on the wall, and there is a light and some books on the desk. They are all enjoying themself(X4). 剖析: family指整個家庭時是集體名詞,相應的動詞用單數,指家庭的一個個成員時,相應的動詞用復數.例如:My family is a large one.我家是個大家庭. My family are all sitting around the table eating.我家人都坐在桌旁吃飯. 很顯然文中指的是 Tom家的成員,因此謂語動詞應改用復數are.2.play是玩耍、游樂;而“拿……玩,以……自娛”,要用play with,此處是逗貓玩,所以應改用playing with. 3.給某人打電話應用make a telephone call to somebody. 4.enjoy oneself=have a good time.表示“玩得很高興”.them是復數,所以self也應改用其復數形式selves,即:themselves. 總評:本文要點齊全,達到了預期的寫作目的,文章語言流暢、時態正確、方位有序、意思表達清楚,文中的錯誤主要集中在謂語動詞的單復數和一些動詞短語的搭配上,希望作者引起重視. |
科目:初中英語 來源:雙色筆記初中英語總復習 題型:056
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根據下面圖畫用英語寫一篇日記,描述你6月4日星期三下午放學回家路上發生的事情.
注意:
1.日記必須包括所有圖畫內容,可以適當增加細節;使日記連貫.
2.你是畫中的女學生:.
3.詞數:100詞左右.
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