Question

書面表達 (本大題共5分)

學校將舉行初中英語征文比賽，主題是介紹你的朋友Nick，請你根據下列要點完成征文。

1. 勤奮而有耐心，總是樂于助人，經常幫同學輔導數學難題。

2. 我7歲時就跟他交上了朋友。

3. 他愿意替我保守秘密，所以我什么都可以告訴他。

4. 他癡迷于自己動手做，他喜歡修壞了的東西。

5. 他媽媽的生日要到了，他決定……

注意：

1. 短文須包括所有內容要點，要求語句通順、意思連貫；

2. 第5 要點的內容須用1～2句話作適當發揮；

3. 詞數70個左右，短文的開頭和結尾句已給出，不計入總詞數。

My best friend Nick is a lovely boy with a good personality.

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How lucky I am to have such a good friend！

Answer 1

My best friend Nick is a lovely boy with a good personality. He is hardworking and patient. He is always ready to help others. He often helps classmates with Maths problems. I made friends with him when I was 7 years old. He is willing to keep secrets for me, so I can tell him everything. He is crazy about DIY. He likes repairing broken things. His mother’s birthday is coming. He decided to make a birthday card for her by himself. He thinks his mother is sure to like it..

How lucky I am to have such a good friend！

【解析】

試題分析：這篇文章叫小作者介紹自己的朋友，小作者首先要認真閱讀前面的提示認真審題，確定文章的文章的內容。同時應選用合適的連接詞或過渡詞，使文章具有一定的連貫性。

【亮點說明】這篇短文不僅使用了大量的的短語，可見該生英語功底扎實。.如He is willing to keep secrets for me, so I can tell him everything. He thinks his mother is sure to like it.. How lucky I am to have such a good friend！等使文章的表達更豐富，更有邏輯性，更富有條理.

考點：考查提綱類作文。