Question

11．假如你是李磊，你的朋友王強正考慮今年參加去New York英語夏令營，以下是他發給你的郵件，請根據所給提示內容給他回復一封郵件．字數80---100．
Dear  Li Lei，
I'm thinking about taking part in the 2016English Camp．I know you took part in it last year．Could youplease tell me something about it？
Yours，Wang Qiang
提示內容：1．費用：35，000              2．為時兩周，兩名老師帶隊
3．景色迷人，物美價廉        4．活動既輕松又有趣
Dear Wang Qiang
                                  

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一 
There were over a hundred middle school students and two teachers有一百多名中學生和兩名教師．這是there be 句型，表示某地有某物．
高分句型二
Learning English was exciting and the teachers were very friendly and helpful學習英語很有趣，老師也很友好，樂于助人．Learning English 是動名詞做主語．

解答 Dear  Wang Qiang，
I took part in the 2015 English Camp．It was really a good chance to improve my English．It cost me 35，000 yuan．【要點一，費用：35，000】There were over a hundred middle school students and two teachers【高分句型一，注意there be句型的使用】，it lasted two weeks【要點二，為時兩周，兩名老師帶隊】，there were many activities which were funny and relaxing，We also visited many places of interest【要點三，景色迷人，物美價廉】．Learning English was exciting and the teachers were very friendly and helpful【高分句型二，注意動名詞的使用】．This camp was a real life-changing experience that I will never forget．【要點四，活動既輕松又有趣】
Yours，
LiLei

點評 動筆前應先認真閱讀材料，圍繞所給材料組織內容，確定主要短語，句式等問題．注意不要遺漏要點，句子要通順連貫，沒有語法錯誤．