Question

11．作為學生，我們應該怎樣做一個合格的環保者．請以"How  to  Protect  the  environment"寫一篇70詞的作文．
提示詞：leave rubbish，here and there，don't spit，care for wild animals，plant trees，do
everything，walk on grass，pick flowers，..As we all know，the environment around us is getting worse and worse．We should do something to protect ourenvironment．The first thing we can do is to use cloth bags instead of plastic bags when we go shopping．It helps to protect the environment．The second thing we can do is that we shouldn'tleave rubbish and spit here and there．Also，we should never forget to turn off the lights and TVwhen we leave the classrooms in order to save energy．What's more，it would be better if we walk or ride a bike to school．We should try our best to reduce pollution and waste．We shouldn't use disposable plates，bowls．We should plant more trees and grow grass to prevent it．We should also prevent people from cutting down too many trees．We shouldn't walk on the grass and pick flowers．In fact，even the simplest everyday activities can make areal difference to the environment．I believe we can make the world a better place to live in．．

Answer 1

分析 【高分句型一】
1．The first thing①we can do is ②to use cloth bags③instead of plastic  bags ④when we go shopping．第一件我們能做的事情是購物的時候用布袋不用塑料袋．
①we can do作為定語從句，修飾先行詞thing，關系詞which作為從句的賓語，可以省略．
②動詞不定式做表語，與is構成系表結構．
③instead of 代替…而不是…
④when引導的時間狀語從句．
【高分句型二】
Also，we should never ①forget to ②turn off the lights and TV③when we leave the classrooms ④in order to save energy．離開教室的時候我們也不應該忘記關燈和電視，為了節約能量．
①forget to do sth 忘了去做某事．
②turn off 關…
③when引導的時間狀語從句．
④in order to 為了…，表目的，做目的狀語．

解答 How  to  Protect  the  environment
As we all know，the environment around us is getting worse and worse．We should do something to protect ourenvironment．The first thing we can do is to use cloth bags instead of plastic  bags when we go shopping．【高分句型一】It helps to protect the environment．（在購物時用布袋替代塑料袋）The second thing we can do is that we shouldn't leave rubbish and spit here and there （不亂扔垃圾，不隨地吐痰）Also，we should never forget to turn off the lights and TV when we leave the classrooms in order to save energy．【高分句型二】（離開教室應關燈電視）What's more，it would be better if we walk or ride a bike to school．（最好走路或騎自行車上班）We should try our best to reduce pollution and waste．We shouldn't use disposable plates，bowls．（我們不應該使用一次性盤子，碗等等）We should plant more trees and grow grass to prevent it．We should also prevent people from cutting down too many trees．We shouldn't walk on the grass and pick flowers（不要濫砍樹）In fact，even the simplest everyday activities can make a real difference to the environment．I believe we can make the world a better place to live in．

點評 動筆前要先認真閱讀要點，然后圍繞要點適當發揮．寫作中，應注意描述的全面性，盡量將提示的內容利用上．語言的表述應該符合語法的結構，造句應該符合英語的表達習慣．適當使用連詞，做到上下文聯系緊密，符合邏輯關系．