Question

12．在我們成長的道路，朋友是不可或缺的那道風景．在相知相伴的歲月里，留下了多少美好的故事和難忘的回憶!某英語報社以"A Story Between My Friend and Me"為題開展征文活動，請你按要求用英語寫一篇文章參賽．
要求：
故事必須原創；
80-120詞，開頭已給出，不計入總詞數；
文中不能出現自己的姓名和所在學校的名稱．
參考要點：
分享故事（起因，經過，結果…）；
表達感受（幸福，感動，思考…）；
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A Story Between My Friend and Me
There is always something unforgettable in my life，especially the story between my friend and me．
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Answer 1

分析 高分句型：
①So I had to stay in hospital for about one month and I was worried about my study．所以我不得不在醫院呆了一個月，我擔心我的學習．這里have to do sth表示不得不做某事；be worried about表示擔心…
②When he knew about that，he said he could help me with my study．當他知道這一點時，他說他可以幫助我學習．這里when引導一個時間狀語從句；said后面跟一個賓語從句，主句是一般過去時，從句也應該用過去時形式；help sb with sth表示幫助某人做某事．

解答 There is always something unforgettable in my life，especially the story between my friend and me．One thing happened in the past had a deep influence on me．（引出話題）
Here is the story．On a rainy day，I suddenly fell down and hurt myself badly．My left leg was broken．So I had to stay in hospital for about one month and I was worried about my study（高分句型）．Then my friend Mingming came to see me．When he knew about that，he said he could help me with my study（高分句型）．On hearing this，I didn't feel worried any more．From that day on，he taught me every day．（重點介紹故事所發生的時間及經過）I was so moved．I didn't fall behind the other students with Mingming's help．I thanked him a lot．（我的感受）
In my opinion，friends are very important in our life．No matter what happens，true friends will always be friends．（我的觀點）

點評 書面表達題考查的是英語的應用能力．寫作時要注意：要點的提煉要全；關鍵短語和句型要寫對；過渡詞和過渡短語要自然，通順地道；最后還要注意人稱和時態使用要正確．