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英語課上，老師向同學們介紹了2013年度“最美孝心少年”的感人事跡，你深受感動。請你用英語寫一則日記，寫出自己的感受。內容要點及要求：

1 表明自己將向“孝心少年”學習；2 你將在日常生活、學習中做些什么來孝敬父母；

3詞數：80左右，開頭部分已給出，不計入總詞數；

提示詞：learn from, respect, care for, do some housework, study hard

Monday, June 30 Sunny

This morning, our English teacher told us some stories about “the most beautiful filial piety youth in 2013”______________________________________________

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Monday, June 30 Sunny

 

 

Answer 1

This morning, our English teacher told us some stories about “the most beautiful filial piety youth in 2013 ”. I was deeply moved. Those teenagers set us a good example in respecting and caring for parents.

I used to make my parents unhappy and now I feel ashamed about it. I think I should learn from them. I will help do some housework and take good care of my mum and dad when they are ill. I will try my best to study hard so that I can enter the key high school in our city. I hope I can become a filial piety youth like them.

【解析】

試題分析：本文要求寫一篇日記，關于自己聽了2013年度“最美孝心少年”的感人事跡后的感受及自己如何向其學習。應該用第一人稱。寫作前先根據話題列出提綱，寫出有關的短語和固定表達備用，最后串聯起來。

【亮點說明】 本文做到了包含所有內容要點，語句通順，標點符號運用正確。在80詞左右的篇幅中，恰當地運用了一些短語和句式，如used to， learn from，take care of，try one’s best to do等。

考點：話題作文。