Question

14．春節就要到了，你準備做什么呢？說說你的計劃和安排．請根據提示寫一篇80 字左右的短文．短文必須包括所提示的內容，可適當發揮．
提示：the Spring Festival    Where are you going？How are you going there？
Who are you going there？How long are you staying there？What are you doing there？
The Spring Festival is coming．I'm going to Beijing．I hear it is really a great place to relax．I'm going there by train because it's cheap and safe．My parents are going with me．We are staying there for two weeks．We are visiting some interesting places．For example，the GreatWall and the Summer Palace．Then we are eating some delicious snacks and taking some beautiful photos．I can make more friends during my trip and learn moreabout Chinese culture．I hope we are having fun．．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一：
I hear it is really a great place to relax．我聽說這真是個放松的好地方．
I hear 后跟了一個賓語從句，省略了引導詞that；to relax為動詞不定式作后置定語，修飾great place．
高分句型二：
I'm going there by train because it's cheap and safe．我要坐火車去那兒，因為它既便宜又安全．
這是because引導的原因狀語從句；be going to為一般將來時的運用，此處后跟there為副詞，故省略to；  by train 乘火車，buy+交通工具作方式狀語．

解答 The Spring Festival is coming．I'm going to Beijing．I hear it is really a great place to relax．【高分句型一】（點明度假的地點）I'm going there by train because it's cheap and safe．【高分句型二】（乘車的方式）My parents are going with me．（和誰一起去）We are staying there for two weeks．（在那呆多長時間）We are visiting some interesting places．For example，the Great Wall and the Summer Palace．Then we are eating some delicious snacks and taking some beautiful photos．I can make more friends during my trip and learn more about Chinese culture．（活動安排）I hope we are having fun．（表達希望）

點評 本篇是一篇提綱作文，寫作時，切記逐句翻譯，寫作前，首先要理清思路，然后選用合適的詞或短語，讓文意更通順，學習中注意總結，牢記一些固定句式及短語，寫作時就可以適當引用，使文章的表達更有邏輯性，更富有條理．