Question

7．你校就"中學生業余生活"進行了調查．其結果顯示，有很多學生是典型的"宅童"，他們喜歡"宅"在家里上網或看電視，而不去參加戶外活動．請你寫一篇報告，說明這項調查的結果，并談談你對這部分學生行為的看法以及你給他們的建議．

63.5%	待在家里
14%	運動
8%	學習
3%	與朋友聊天
11.5%	當志愿者

注意：1詞數90左右．短文開頭已經寫好，不計入總詞數．
2條理清晰，語義連貫，句式規范，字跡工整．
3短文中不得提及真實的人名、校名等相關信息．
Last week，we did a survey on students'free time activities in my school．
                                                                       

Answer 1

分析 【高分句型一】
I think this habit is good我認為這個習慣好．
think后是省略that的賓語從句．
【高分句型二】
Watching TV and surfing on the Internet a lot are not healthy for our eyes．看電視和上網太多對我們的眼睛不好．
動名詞短語做主語，兩個短語，故謂語動詞用復數．

解答 Last week，we did a survey on students'free time activities in my school．
About 63.5% students stay at home．They like watching TV and surfing on the Internet．And 22% them will exercise on their free time．I think this habit is good．【高分句型一】Some student also will take part in outdoor activities．For example，about 11.5% them do as a volunteer．It is very meaningful for students．A few students，3% them choose hang out when they are free．（調查結果）
I think students always stay at home is not good．It will make them face overweight problem．Watching TV and surfing on the Internet a lot are not healthy for our eyes．【高分句型二】We should do exercise more and often take part in some meaningful activities．（看法建議）

點評 寫作要抓住要點．要在"準"字上下功夫．在寫作中注意人稱與謂語動詞的數關系和動詞時態等諸多方面．在平時的練習中，注意多背誦范文，對于寫的好的句子要進行默寫，這樣在寫作時就能寫出準確地道的作文．