Question

假如你們班來了一位新同學Ｔｏｍ，請根據下面中文提示寫一篇60-80詞的英語短文介紹他。

1.他16歲，來自美國，學習努力，對人友好，我們都很喜歡他。

2.他習慣很好，從不熬夜，總是很早起床。

3.他每天鍛煉，非常健康。

4.上周末天氣晴朗，他和家人去了故宮，在那拍了許多照片，還吃了北京烤鴨，他覺得很美味，玩得很開心。

參考詞匯：鍛煉exercise；美國the United States；熬夜stay up late；

故宮 the Palace Museum； 北京烤鴨Beijing Roast Duck

要求：內容正確，語句通順，字跡工整，不少于80詞。

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Answer 1

One possible version：

I have a new classmate, Tom. He is sixteen years old. He is from the United States. He works hard and he is friendly to us. So we all like him. He has good habits. He never stays up late and he always gets up early. Because he exercises every day, he is very healthy. Last weekends it was sunny, so he went to the Palace Museum with his family. There he took a lot of photos and ate Beijing Roast Duck. He thought it was delicious. He had fun there.

【解析】

試題分析：

這是一篇給材料作文，介紹班里的新同學Tom。結合所給材料，可知本文主要考查一般現在時態和一般過去時，人稱為單數第一，三人稱，注意主謂一致問題，句子結構主要為系表結構，注意一些常見句式的應用，比如：I have ......;He is......;He has......;so he went to......；He thought.......等句式的應用。寫作中注意運用代詞，注意多種句式交替運用。寫作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關系，注意文中要包含題目所給的詞匯。

【亮點說明】本文結構緊湊，語言簡練。開頭介紹了我的新同學的名字，接下來介紹他的生活習慣，最后介紹他上周參觀故宮時所做的事。此處用了 is from，works hard， is friendly to，stays up late ，took a lot of photos等這些詞組的運用也讓文章增色不少。

考點：提綱作文。