Question

(本大題10分,開頭已給出，但不計入總詞數，文中不能出現真實姓名和校名)

Animal	the panda
Look	Color	黑白色
Eyes	圓圓的黑眼睛
Favorite food	bamboo
Reason	非�？蓯�

My favorite animal in the zoo

My name is Li Ming . Today_______________________________________________

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Answer 1

My favorite animal in the zoo

My name is Li Ming . Today is Sunday. I go to visit the zoo with my friends. In the zoo, we see the pandas from Ya’an. They are my favorite animals. They are black and white. They have round and black eyes. Their favorite food is bamboo. They are very cute, so I love them very much. I am happy today.
【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇給材料作文，介紹今天去動物園的活動和自己最喜歡的動物。結合所給材料，可知本文主要考查一般現在時態，人稱為第一，三人稱，注意主謂一致問題，句子結構主要為系表結構，注意一些常見句式的應用，比如： I go to......； They are......；They have.....及I love......等句式的應用。寫作中注意運用代詞，注意多種句式交替運用。寫作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關系。

【亮點說明】本文結構緊湊，語言簡練。開頭介紹了去動物園餐館，接下來介紹自己最喜歡的動物熊貓，最后說出自己很高興。此處用了go to visit the zoo，with my friends，very much 等這些詞組的運用也讓文章增色不少。

考點：提綱作文。