Question

最近，某中學英語報向學生征文，主題New Look of My Hometown。請你根據以下內容提示，用英語為該報寫一篇短文，介紹家鄉的情況并發表自己的看法。

概 況	1．氣候夏熱多雨，冬冷多雪，冬夏溫差很大 2．近年經濟發展迅速，城市面貌一新，高樓林立，道路寬敞，環境優美； 3．人民生活條件不斷改善，不少人搬進新居，擁有私家車。
你的看法	家鄉人民將更加努力工作……

注意：1．可適當增加細節，使短文連貫、通順；

2．短文的開頭已為你寫好，不計入總詞數；

3．詞數100左右。

參考詞匯：economy經濟 

New Look of My Hometown

My hometown lies in the east of  Liaoning ，with a river flowing through．_____________

 

Answer 1

【答案】

One possible version：

New Look of My Hometown

My hometown lies in the east of Liaoning, with a river flowing through．It is a beautiful city．The climate here is warm with plenty of rain in summer and cold with plenty of snow in winter．There is a sharp difference in temperature between summer and winter. 

In recent years，the economy of the city has been developing rapidly．The city is taking on a new look with high buildings，wide roads and better surroundings．People’s living conditions are improving day by day．Many people have moved into new apartments and some even have cars of their own．

I’m sure people in my hometown will work still harder to make my hometown more beautiful and our life happier．

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇提綱類作文，我們需要用正確的英語把給出的要點表達出來.本作文中給出的要點比較具體,故需要準確表達.寫作時注意準確運用時態，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關系，盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時也要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次。特別注意在選擇句式時要賦予變化。

考點：提綱類作文

點評：本文屬于提綱類作文，動筆前，一定要認真分析要點，理解要點要表達的含義，不能遺漏要點，跑題偏題。平時除了加強詞匯積累，寫作聯系以外，還可以適當記憶一些類似的范文，這樣在考試中可以起到事半功倍的效果。