Question

假設你是學校太陽能汽車研究小組成員， 請用英語寫一篇短文， 對比介紹太陽能汽車和普通汽車。主要信息如下：

	太陽能汽車	普通汽車
特點	使用太陽能	使用汽油，燃油
優點	安全，清潔	污染環境
缺點	能量少， 速度慢，夜間不能行使	能量足， 使用方便
建議	發展技術，改善能量	使用清潔能源

[寫作要求]
只能用5個句子表達全部內容
作文中不能出現真實姓名和學校名稱
[評分標準]
句子結構準確，信息內容完整，篇章結構連貫

Answer 1

Solar cars are cars that use sunlight for power while common cars use gas or petral as their fuel. Both of them have advantages and disadvantages. Solar cars are safe and clean but they have low power and they are slow and they cannot run at night. Common cars have strong power and it is convenient for us to use but they pollute the environment.
I suggest that we need to develop future technologies to improve the power for solar cars and to use clean energy for common cars.

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【亮點說明】Solar cars are cars that use sunlight for power while common cars use gas or petral as their fuel. 這句話用了定語從句和while的并列句， Solar cars are safe and clean but they have low power and they are slow and they cannot run at night. 這句話用了but的轉折句和并列句，Common cars have strong power and t it is convenient for us to use but they pollute the environment.這句話用了be convenient to do， I suggest that we need to develop future technologies to improve the power for solar cars and to use clean energy for common cars.這句話用了虛擬語氣和不定式做目的狀語。