Going online
Recently going online has become more and more popular with middle school students.
In my opinion, there are some advantages for the students to go online. First, it can broaden our knowledge and make us know the latest news at home and abroad. Second, there are many learning materials on the Internet which are useful for us to learn English. Also, we can make many online friends.
However, there are some disadvantages. Most students play computer games instead of studying their lessons, which will affect their study. What’s worse, going online too often can do harm to our eyes. Besides, without much experience, it’s easy for us to make bad friends and be influenced to do stupid things.
So I think as students, we can go online properly. We should choose things which are valuable to our study and life. We must place study, health and safety before other things.
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【亮點說明】Second, there are many learning materials on the Internet which are useful for us to learn English.這里含有一個定語從句;However, there are some disadvantages. Most students play computer games instead of studying their lessons, which will affect their study.這里含有一個非限制性定語從句。We should choose things which are valuable to our study and life. 這里含有一個定語從句