Question

假定你是西安某一中學高三學生李華。在一個英文網絡論壇上,你看到如下的一個帖子:

??? With the college entrance examination approaching, quite a few students are suffering mental problems. It does great harm to their study and health. What can we do to help those students?

請你回帖，要點如下： 

1. 列出某些學生心理焦慮的現象；????? 2. 提出應該采取的對策（如積極態度和應對方法）。

注意：1. 文章的開頭已經給出（不計人總詞數），可適當發揮；

    ? 2. 詞數：120左右。

?? I agree with what you said. That many students have some mental problems also worries me.?????????

 

 

Answer 1

【答案】

I agree with what you said. That many students have some mental problems also worries me. Some students are so worried about exams and academic achievements that they can’t fall asleep at night. Some are discouraged and tend to lose their confidence because of constant failure in exams. Others can’t get along well with their parents or with their classmates. They always feel stressed and easily get angry.

???? As a matter of fact, there’re many ways for us to deal with our mental problems. First of all, we can turn to our teachers for help, including our teacher of psychology. Second, communication is of vital importance. When we have a talk about our problems with our friends or classmates, we can feel greatly relieved. Last but not least, we need to develop a positive attitude towards our studies and our life. With the mental problems removed, we will keep in normal mental health and study happily.

【解析】

試題分析：本文要求列出心理焦慮的各種現象，使用一般現在時的時態和第三人稱。在提出應該采取對策的時候，又屬于議論文的格式。

本文要點：1.列舉學生心理焦慮的現象：部分學生擔憂考試成績；一些學生無法入睡；有些失去信心；有些學生與他人無法相處；2.解決的對策：向老師求助；對于別人交流；對待生活有積極的態度；

在寫作的時候要靈活運用英語知識，采用不同的表達方式將各要點完整地表述出來，注意主次分明，詳略得當。語言力求準確、簡潔。根據情景的發展，按順序安排好材料。同時應選用合適的連接詞或過渡詞，使文章具有一定的連貫性�？忌�必須認真查驗是否有漏寫情況，有無拼寫錯誤及標點誤用等。

【亮點說明】

本文的亮點是連接詞的使用，如：as a matter of fact, first of all, Second和last but not least這些連詞讓文章成為一個整體。另外句中使用了一些高級詞匯：get along well with…, develop attitudes towards…等等。

考點：考察社會現象類作文