Question

書面表達 （共1題，滿分25分）
為了慶祝我校建校90周年，你所在的班級將要舉辦一次主題為 “What Can We Do For Our School?” 的英語演講比賽。請寫一篇英語演講稿，要求從以下幾個方面進行闡述，可適當舉例說明。
1、時刻要舉止行為得體，尊敬老師，關心幫助同學；
2、關心熱愛班集體，保持校園環境清潔優美；
3、養成良好學習習慣，認真學習文化知識;
4、鍛煉身體，將來為社會做貢獻，為母校爭光。
注意：詞數：100—120詞；開頭和結尾已經寫好，但不計入總詞匯。
參考詞匯： 校園----campus    
What Can We Do For Our School?
Hello, everyone. It’s nice to speak about what we can do for our school, and I think each of us can do something.
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Thank you for listening!

Answer 1

Hello, everyone. It’s nice to speak about what we can do for our school, and I think each of us can do something. The first thing we can do is to behave ourselves well and be polite all the time. We should respect the teachers and help our classmates. Then we should try our best to make our campus clean and beautiful. Every one of us may take care of the trees and grass in the campus, and we can also form a good habit of putting the rubbish in the dustbin. If everyone does one thing for our school, I believe we will make our school a better place to study and live in.
As a student, the most important is to study hard，have a good knowledge of every subject and improve ourselves in every aspect. What’s more, we can take exercise and build up our strength in order to make great contributions to our country in the future. Our school will be proud of us.

解析這篇文章主要是根據要點翻譯，但是不能逐字逐句翻譯，文章里用了些高級的詞匯、短語，如：behave ourselves，make our campus clean，form a good habit of ，have a good knowledge of，in every aspect. build up our strength ，make great contributions to ，be proud of，這些都是平常學的，但是學生用的時候就想不起來。在句型翻譯中，范文給了很好的例子：we will make our school a better place to study and live in. the most important is to study hard，對不定式的熟練使用恰到好處。另外值得一提的是，在文章銜接連貫時我們也要注意，像這篇文章，用的是What’s more,讀起來很自然。