Question

某英語刊物正在進行有關旅游的征文活動，請根據以下提示，以Travelling為題目，用英語寫一篇短文，以便向該刊投稿。
1．旅游好處很多：領略大自然以及其他城市的美麗風景；呼吸新鮮空氣；結交新朋友；放松自己，強身健體；
2．旅游常見問題：天氣因素；被人偷；可能受傷；
3．旅游的準備工作：了解天氣情況；找個旅伴(travelling companion)相互照應；小心謹慎；避免意外。
注意：1.內容必須包括以上所有要點；
2．可適當增加內容，以使行文連貫；
3．詞數：100左右。
Travelling
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Answer 1

One possible version:
Travelling
Travelling is a very good activity. When you are free, you can go to a beautiful place to enjoy the beauty of nature. You can breathe the fresh air, meet different people and make friends with them. Thus you will relax.
But travelling is not always pleasant. For example, the weather can be changeable. You may be caught in the rain and may catch a cold in the rain while travelling. You may have your money stolen or may be injured.
Therefore, when going on a trip, you must prepare yourself carefully. You should have clear information about the weather, choose a good travelling companion and be very careful about where you go so as to avoid accidents. If so, you will surely enjoy yourself.

試題分析：本文是篇材料作文。內容要求1．旅游好處很多：領略大自然以及其他城市的美麗風景；呼吸新鮮空氣；結交新朋友；放松自己，強身健體；2．旅游常見問題：天氣因素；被人偷；可能受傷；3．旅游的準備工作：了解天氣情況；找個旅伴(travelling companion)相互照應；小心謹慎；避免意外。由此分析應該用一般現在時，適當用一些情態動詞表達感情色彩。全文應該用第二人稱形式表示是大眾化的人。另外，注意控制字數100詞左右。
【亮點說明】該文包含所有的內容要點。同時注意了句子開頭的變化。應用了較多的語法結構和詞匯。使用了較復雜結構或較高級詞匯。 如make friends with，For example，be caught in the rain，while travelling ，so as to等等。有效地使用了語句間的連接成分，使全文結構緊湊。如：thus, but，therefore,if so等等。