Question

分析下面的書面表達，指出其中的錯誤．

　　目前中學生出國學習的現象非常火爆，很多家長也為此不惜代價；請你談談你對這種現象的看法，是先上完高中打好基礎再出國好，還是趁早出去好．

　　At present, in order to let their children receive better education, some parents send their children abroad to study. This results in that (1) more and more students want to go to (2) abroad to study without finishing their study in the middle school. In my own (3) opinion, I think it is not necessary to go abroad so early.

　　First, the education system and teaching methods are different with (4) ours. I doubt whether you can learn normally abroad. Besides, the cost is very expensive (5) in foreign countries. Since you can not earn enough money by yourself, you have to ask your parents for money. On the other hand, your (6) knowledge is limited for you haven't finished middle school yet. It is not worth spending so much money to study abroad.

　　I suggested (7) to students that they finish middle school and then go to university in their own country. After graduation, you (8) can go abroad to make a further study. That will be much better.

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解題思路：(1)This results in that改為“As a result，”．因為 results后面的in為介詞，一般介詞后面不能接that引導的從句． 　　(2)由于abroad為副詞，它前面的to為介詞，而介詞后面應接名詞、代詞，因此，to應去掉． 　　(3)own應改為 personal．In one's personal opinion為一個固定習語． 　　(4)with應改為 from．be different from為一個固定搭配． 　　(5)expensive應改為high，因為“價值、價格”應該與“高(high)、低(low)”搭配．我們可以說Something is expensive/cheap． 　　(6)your改為our．因為考生本人也是學生．只有這樣才符合邏輯． 　　(7)根據短文的整體時態，suggested應必為suggest． 　　(8)根據短文中的最后一段里的I suggest to students that…，從而可以推出 you應改為 she or he才符合邏輯．