Question

你的朋友杰克寫信給你敘述了以下內容：1.他發現現在很多學生很自私，不在乎友誼。2.他覺得父母與老師不理解他。3.他發現生活沒有樂趣。看到他的信你很著急，作為好朋友請以湯姆的身份給他寫一封回信解決他的煩惱，以下三點為主要內容：1.不是所有人都自私，要學會溝通；2.學會與父母真誠溝通；3.把注意力多集中在學習上
注意：1.詞數100左右
2.可以適當地增加細節，以便行文連貫
3.開頭語已為你寫好
Dear Jack,
Here I am writing to you to reply to your letter.
                                                                         
                                                                         
                                                                         
                                                                         
                                                                         
                                                                         
                                                                         
                                                                         
                                                                         

Answer 1

Dear Jack
Here I am writing to you to reply to your letter. From your letter, I know maybe you are not getting along well with your new classmates.Perhaps several of them are selfish.But I am sure ,most of them should be friendly.just try to communicate with them.Then it comes to your misunderstanding between you and your parents and your teacher. I think it is you who are to blame. You must have been told that both our parents and our teachers are kind to us .so talk with them sincerely to solve the problem.Please pay more attention to your study,and you will find happiness in the knowledge. And remember: you are always my best friend.I hope you can be surrounded by happiness every moment.
Yours Tom

試題分析：
本文是一篇提綱式書信體作文。作文除了開頭句的內容外，針對杰克寫信敘述內容提到的三個要點逐一予      以回復。文章要點提示較多，可以直接依據提供的要點，按照寫作的幾個步驟（審題——注要點——圈短語——連成句，篇——查病錯），將文章翻譯出來即可。注意句子的銜接，以提高作文的檔次。動筆前，一定要認真分析要點，理解要點要表達的含義，不能遺漏要點，平時除了加強詞匯及高級句型積累。
【亮點說明】A.多變的高級句式如強調的運用 it is you who are to blame及祈使句+and+陳述句的靈活運用 pay more attention to your study,and you will find happiness 還有 it comes to....(當談到…)及情態動詞被動語態的使用must have been told B.短語的靈活運用,如get along well with與…相處融洽，communicate with與…交流，be surrounded by被…圍繞著。