Question

研究結果表明：互聯網給人們的生活帶來了方便的同時，也給大家帶來了一些問題。在人際交往方面，網絡既拉近了我們的距離，也疏離了我們的感情。請你簡單論述網絡給人們的人際溝通所帶來的影響。
字數：不少于120字。
What are the strengths and weaknesses of the Internet in our interpersonal communication?
 
                                                                                       
                                                                                       
                                                                                      
                                                                                       
                                                                                       
                                                                                       
                                                                                       
                                                                                       
                                                                              

Answer 1

What are the strengths and weaknesses of the Internet in our interpersonal communication?
The Internet has made it possible for us to keep in touch with our friends conveniently. We can rapidly access information about others through their micro blog, QQ, facebook or email, even without calling them or talking face to face.
However, the Internet threatens to change our interpersonal communication and relationships. The idea that it is no longer necessary to communicate face to face has reduced the effectiveness and efficiency of communication. Misunderstandings among people and the absence of feelings are increasingly common.
Therefore, we should take care not to depend too much on the Internet and ignore the importance of face-to-face communication. Only so can we make full use of the Internet while avoiding its negative effects.

試題分析：本文屬于半開放性的作文，要求考生論述網絡給人們的人際溝通所帶來的影響。闡述互聯網給人們的生活方便也帶來了問題。考生可以從兩個方面進行闡述，注意分段，寫作時注意準確運用時態，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關系，盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時也要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次。特別注意在選擇句式時要賦予變化，運用自己能夠掌握的語言技能合理的寫作。
點評：半開放性作文的難度較大，要求考生自己根據要點內容梳理要點，然后在整理成文，在寫作時要合理運用連接詞和高級詞匯高級句型，讓文章更有層次。