Question

假定你校正在開展“根除陋習，創建文明校園”活動。請你以此為主題寫一篇發言稿，向全校學生倡議：
根除：亂扔垃圾，浪費糧食，吸煙。。。
提倡：講禮貌，互助。。。
注意：1.詞數100左右；
2.可以適當增加細節，以使行文連貫；3.開頭和結尾已為你寫好，不計入總詞數。
Dear friends,
As is known to all, our school has launched a campaign against bad habits in order to establish a civilized campus,
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That’s all. Thank

Answer 1

As is known to all, our school has launched a campaign against bad habits in order to establish a civilized campus. But it has come to my notice that lots of bad behavior still exists in our school. This does great harm to the image of our school.
Therefore, I strongly urge that we students stop throwing rubbish everywhere and spitting in public. Besides, every one must discipline himself not to make dirty remarks or waste food. Such bad manners as smoking and fighting should also be removed from our campus. At the same time, we should also promote the spirit of helping each other and healthy competition. Once again I’m here earnestly calling on everyone to take action and contribute to making our school a nicer place.
That’s all. Thank you.

試題分析：這是一篇發言稿，也是提綱式作文：題目只給了大概的提綱，沒有具體的要點，學生要根據所給提綱，列出要點，并以此為基礎充分發揮自己的想象力，靈活運用英語知識，采用不同的表達方式將各要點完整地表述出來，注意主次分明，詳略得當。語言力求準確、簡潔。根據情景的發展，按順序安排好材料。同時應選用合適的連接詞或過渡詞，使文章具有一定的連貫性�？忌�必須認真查驗是否有漏寫情況，有無拼寫錯誤及標點誤用等
【亮點說明】But it has come to my notice that lots of bad behavior still exists in our school. This does great harm to the image of our school.這句話用的是it做形式主語，
I strongly urge that we students stop throwing rubbish everywhere and spitting in public. 這句話用了賓語從句，every one must discipline himself not to make dirty remarks or waste food. 這句話用了不定式，Such bad manners as smoking and fighting should also be removed from our campus. we should also promote the spirit of helping each other and healthy competition.這句話用了動名詞， Once again I’m here earnestly calling on everyone to take action and contribute to making our school a nicer place. 這句話用了現在分詞做狀語，還有文章用了Therefore, Besides, At the same time,這樣的關聯詞，使文章更加連貫。