Question

請根據下列提示，用英語為某品牌一款智能手機寫一篇促銷說明
必要性：手機是人們聯系工具之一
顏色：黑色和白色 功能：收發短信，照相，上網，下載音樂，瀏覽網頁……
其他：MP4, 自選游戲……參考詞匯：瀏覽 browse
注意：1.詞數100左右   2.可以適當增加細節，以使行文連貫。
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Answer 1

 
Thanks for choosing our smart phones. As we know, mobile phones have become the most important way of communication, with which we can get in touch with each other wherever and whenever we are.
This product for us has many different functions to meet different needs, such as sending or receiving short messages. Besides, you won’t take pains to carry your camera any more, for the mobile phone itself has one. Thus, you can take pictures whenever you like. What’s more, with the function of surfing the Internet, it allows you to browse wet pages and download what you want. It can even bring you a flood of music and movies. Most importantly, it can be used as an MP4 as well as a computer game player.
As for colors, we offer you the choice between white and black.

試題分析：本文是一篇說明文。文章的要點都已經給了出來，考生發揮的余地較小，只需要翻譯成英語即可，寫作的時候要把所有的要點都包括在內，不要遺漏。同時注意使用被動語態，倒裝句等不同的句式，讓文章充滿變化，不要那么的死板。同時要使用高級的詞匯和詞組提高文章的檔次。
【亮點說明】文中使用了非常好的短語和句子為文章增色不少，比如thank for，get in touch with，such as，allow sb. to do，be used as，between … and …；which引導的非限定性定語從句。并注意了句子的銜接如so，Besides，Thus，whenever，What’s more等等。