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Ⅴ. 第二節書面表達：（滿分30分）
每個同學對緊張的學習生活都有不同的減壓方式。假設你對本校100名同學的減壓方式進行了調查（調查結果如下表所示），請你根據下表內容向你班同學進行介紹，并結合自己的實際提出你的看法和建議。可根據需要適當發揮：
注意：1、文章的開頭已給出，不計入總詞數。
2、詞數100—120
3、參考詞匯：調查 survey 圖表 chart
減壓 relieve pressure/ stress 放松 get relaxed

Hi everyone，I have recently made a survey among 100 students in our school about how
they relieve pressure in their daily school life.
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Hi everyone. I have recently made a survey among 100 students in our school about how they relieve pressure in their daily school life. Their ways vary from person to person. As the chart shows, up to 29 percent of the students choose music as their favorite way and the percentage of those turning to TV and the Internet reaches 28, while 18 percent get out of their worries by sleeping. Surprisingly, exercise and others take up only 15 and 10 percent.
Personally I prefer taking exercise to get relaxed. Exercise can lift my mood and build
up my strength. Every time I feel stressed, I take exercise. All the worries will disappear with the sweat. Besides, it contributes to sound sleep, which makes me more confident and optimistic. To sum up, exercise is a perfect way to reduce anxiety.  (116w)

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