Question

近來你們學校正準備創建和申報“省綠色學�！闭埬銚�此給某英文報寫一篇短文

內容包括 ※建設綠色校園的重要性……

※綠色校園不僅是指綠色的環境……

※為了建設綠色校園我們應該……

注意 1、詞數100左右2、可以適當增加細節,以使行文連貫 3、開頭語已為你寫好,不計入總詞數。

Recently, our school is aiming at building a green campus. What is a green school?

 

Answer 1

【答案】

不唯一

Recently, our school is aiming at building a green campus. What is a green school? It means not only a green campus, but a "green" atmosphere for our study and life.

For one thing, a green campus means more plants, less pollution and no waste. Each of us can do something, such as planting trees and flowers or just saving electricity and water in our daily life. It will make a big difference. For another thing, it is necessary for us students to make great efforts to create a harmonious atmosphere of mutual trust and respect between teachers and students. Besides, it is important to keep a friendly and supportive attitude towards each other.

Accordingly, if everyone does one thing for our school, we'll surely turn our school into a better one.

【解析】

試題分析：打造文章之骨架審好題，立好意后，就要寫提綱，打造文章的骨架。文章布局要做好3件事：安排好層次段落，鋪設好過渡，處理好開頭和結尾。如命題作文中有提示句，還要從提示句的關鍵詞出發，圍繞關鍵詞開拓思路，發揮聯想，記錄下聯想到的東西，可以是句子或單詞詞組，可以是英語或漢語。理文章之脈絡一篇短文的段落一般分為引導段、主題段和結尾段。每段的主題句非常重要，是作者思維的起點，切題的準繩，闡述的對象�？吹蕉温渲黝}句，讀者大致了解段落要闡述的內容。段落主題句通常是一個語法結構完整、內容概括、用詞簡潔明了的單句。通常將段落主題句置于段落的開頭，可使文章結構更清晰，有說服力。本文的首句已給出，必須接好第二句，使上下文流暢。

考點：提綱作文。

點評：用好連接詞，注意段落間、句子間的連貫性。要做到所寫文章層次分明，思路清晰，文字連貫，就需要在句與句之間，段與段之間架起一座座橋梁，而連接詞起的正是橋梁作用。用詞是否貼切，文法是否正確，句式是否多變，文采是否有生氣，關系到寫作者的語言功底和水平，但也有些竅門是需要長時間累積的。