Question

你所在的研究性學習小組對“中學生的健康狀況”進行了一次調查，主要調查結果如下：

現狀	身體素質逐年下降,肥胖人數增多
原因	學習緊張，體育鍛煉少,較少參加家務等體力勞動,飲食不均衡
專家建議	少上網聊天，保證睡眠每天運動一小時,多吃蔬菜水果，不吃垃圾食品

【寫作內容】
請根據以上信息寫一篇英語短文，在英文校報上投稿。內容包括：中學生的健康現狀、原因及專家建議。
【寫作要求】
注意：1.詞數：100左右.
2.可以適當增加細節，以使行文連貫.
Last week，we made a survey about middle school students' health condition.
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Answer 1

One possible version:
Last week，we made a survey about middle school students' health condition.
The survey shows that the general health of middle school students is declining year by year，with more people having the problem of being overweight. One of the reasons could be that they have a heavy load in their study so that they seldom take physical exercise or do labor work like housework. What's more，many of them don't have a balanced diet. To solve the problem，experts advise that we students should not chat on line so often in order to have enough sleep time and we should do sports for at least one hour a day. Besides，we'd better eat more fruits and vegetables and refuse junk foods.

試題分析：本文是篇指導式提綱式書面表達，雖然限定了內容要點，學生最好采取要點1+1的方式把要點確定為5個，即在原因和專家建議兩個要點進行合理擴展。人稱上調查結果即在現狀和原因兩方面上采用第三人稱，而專家建議部分多采用第一人稱；通篇均采用一般現在時態；注意學以致用，以高中階段熟悉的知識點及恰當的過渡詞追求行文的流暢；用復雜多變的句式和一定的高級詞匯提升檔次；完整、準確、簡潔、規范地表述要點，避免逐字逐句翻譯。
【亮點說明】高級詞匯的運用：decline，overweight等；銜接詞：What's more ，Besides等；復雜多變的句式：with的復合結構；To solve the problem，in order to …（不定式表目的）； The survey shows that…(帶賓語從句的主從復合句)；One of the reasons could be that…(表語從句)；…so that they seldom take physical exercise…(結果狀語從句)；experts advise that we students should not…(“愿、建、命”的虛擬語氣)等既學以致用且處處亮點。