Question

假設你是李華，明年即將進入大學學習，但是不知道怎么樣適應大學的生活。請你就以下大學新生常遇到的情況給北京大學校長寫一封信，尋求建議。
1. 在生活中不會照顧自己；
2. 感到孤獨，經常想家；
3. 錢物容易丟失
4. 對食物、氣候不適應；
5. 校外租房現象。
注意：
1. 信的開頭和結尾已為你寫好，不計入總詞數。
2. 150詞左右。
Dear President,
Yours
Li Hua

Answer 1

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Dear President,
I’m a senior 3 student and I’m going to university next year. But I’m worried about the university life and I’m afraid I can’t adjust to the new environment. So I want to ask for some advice on how to adapt myself to the new life in a short time.
It’s said that most freshmen are confused by the sudden change of their environment and don’t know how to deal with it. They can’t take care of themselves and always feel lonely and homesick. What is more, they may sometimes lose their money, mobile phones and many other things. They even fall ill because of the new climate and food. In addition, some students who feel uneasy to live with others prefer to live out of campus.
As a pre-university student, I want to maintain a meaningful life in the university. Could you tell me how to deal with the problems mentioned above and make my university life more wonderful?
Thank you very much!
Yours,
Li Hua

試題分析：考查應用文中的書信的寫作。請你就以下大學新生常遇到的情況給北京大學校長寫一封信，尋求關于如何適應大學生活的建議。要點都已經給出，書信類短文的關鍵在于要點要全面包括，不能有遺漏和省略。但是要點只是提綱，考生還要在此基礎上增加細節，不要逐字逐句翻譯，同時注意謀篇布局的順序，運用合適的連接詞連接全文，同時選擇高級的詞匯和語法項目讓文章更有文采。審題時注意本文使用一般現在時，描述要盡量選擇簡潔的語言，運用合適的語法規則和詞匯把各要點都準確表述出。難點在于選擇詞匯和句型，可以靈活運用高級詞匯和固定短語準確表述。還要用適當的連接詞被句子連接起來，這樣文章顯得更連貫。
【亮點說明】So I want to ask for some advice on how to adapt myself to the new life in a short time.這句話是疑問詞+不定式做賓語， It’s said that most freshmen are confused by the sudden change of their environment and don’t know how to deal with it. 這句話是it做形式主語的句子， some students who feel uneasy to live with others prefer to live out of campus.這句話用了定語從句， Could you tell me how to deal with the problems mentioned above and make my university life more wonderful?這句話有過去分詞做后置定語，還有范文里面還用了 What is more, In addition,這樣的關聯詞，使文章更連貫。