Question

假設你是晨光中學的高中生李華。你校擬選拔一批優秀學生，利用暑期到晨曦希望小學為學生輔導英語。你希望參加此活動。請根據以下提示，用英語給校評選組寫一封申請信：

● 對此活動的認識（如對本人、小學生及社會的益處等）

●個人優勢（如性格、獨立生活能力、語言能力等）

●你的計劃（如怎樣進行輔導等）

注意：

1. 詞數不少于120；

2. 可適當加入細節，以使內容充實、行文連貫；

3. 信的開頭和結尾已給出，不計入詞數。

參考詞匯：

晨曦希望小學 Chenxi Hope School

 

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Sir or Madam,

I’m Li Hua from Class One, Senior Two. As far as I am concerned, I believe to teach English for pupils from Chen Xi Hope School will be good for both the primary-school students and high-school student tutor, which thus will result in substantial social benefits.

I think I am qualified for being the pupils’ English coach, because I have good character, being independent in life and proficient in English. That’s why I apply for the position; I hope I can join the instructive activity.

My plan for coaching the pupils is to teach them by listening, speaking, reading and writing. What’s more important is to stimulate their interests in learning English as a foreign language, creating a good learning environment. I hope you can offer the opportunity.

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

【解析】這是一封申請書，寫作時注意格式，另外，要點不能遺漏，段落要明確，不能一段式作文。

很多地方都要適當發揮，注意不要用中文式英語。要恰當使用連接詞，使文章通順，有層次感。