Recently I have had a debate about whether money can bring us happiness. The students have different opinions.
Some students think that money is so important that we couldn’t survive without money. Besides, money can help us to solve many problems in life. In addition, it is money that allows us to live a comfortable life.
Others, however, have opposite opinion. They think money doesn’t mean everything. For example, money cannot buy happiness or health. If we attach too much importance to money, we cannot find the real meaning of life, and nor can we find pleasure in life.
Personally, we should not regard money as everything. Money is just a tool that helps us to get what we need. We should use it wisely and properly. Only in this way can we enjoy life to the fullest.
試題分析:本篇書面表達為正反方議論文。討論金錢是否能帶來幸福”這一話題,正方和反方的觀點都已經給出,談我們應如何正確看待金錢,正反方議論文結構典型,要記住基本結構,另外多記憶一些模板句。寫作時可以套用一些固定格式,文章結構為:?引入句→②正方觀點闡述→?反方觀點闡述,還有自己的觀點,論述兩種不同觀點主要是結合要點寫,自己的看法沒有要點要學生自己發揮。要求學生有很好的英語思維能力。但里面的內容句式要富于變化,要注意遣詞造句,層次清晰,語句連貫。
【亮點說明】文中使用了非常好的短語和句子為文章增色不少,比如help sb. do,allow sb to do,live a … life,for example, attach … to …,in this way;還運用句型nor引導的部分倒裝句,only放句首引導的倒裝結構等等。并注意了句子的銜接如:besides, in addition, however, for example, personally等等。