Question

你平時在餐廳就餐時發現不少同學在飲食方面存在很不好的習慣，這直接影響著他們的健康。請根據以下提示，用英語寫一篇短文，刊登在校報上。
現象：一些同學沒有意識到飲食和健康的關系，飲食不科學，常吃一些含熱量和脂肪過高的食品。 后果：一些同學開始發胖，沒精力學習。
建議：大家要意識到健康飲食的重要性，多吃蔬菜和水果，少吃肉，多做運動。
注意：1.要寫成一篇完整的短文，不要直譯。      2．120詞左右。
3. be rich in… 含…豐富的，     calories 熱量

Answer 1

Recently，when eating in the dining hall，I found that some students hadn’t realized the link between diet and good health and they didn’t eat healthy food. They often eat food rich in fat and calories，which makes them too fat. As a result，they often feel too weak to take their lessons energetically. So this affects not only their study but also their health.
Therefore，it is important for us to realize the importance of eating the right kinds of food and eat healthily. We should have more vegetables，more fruits and less meat. Moreover，we should also take enough exercise so that we can keep our body strong

試題分析：本文屬于提綱類作文，話題是不少同學在飲食方面存在很不好的習慣，從而對健康造成危害，文字提示里所出了要點，考生可以翻譯，并且做適當的發揮，在寫作的過程中，一定要注意使用合適的連接詞來連接全文如Therefore，Moreover，As a result等；讓文章成為一個整體。同時注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型提升問的文采和層次。They often eat food rich in fat and calories，which makes them too fat.這是個非限制性定語從句it is important for us to realize the importance of eating the right kinds這是it做形式主語的句型。
點評：提綱類作文最重要的是要把所有的要點都包括在內，不能有遺漏或省略。本文所給要點很全，不需要考生做較多的發揮，在寫作時，注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型，讓文章更有文采。