Question

某英語報社正在征集關于目前減肥問題的短文，假如你是某校的學生李華，請根據下列要求給該報社編輯發一封電子郵件，談談你對減肥這一現象的認識和你認為較好的減肥方法，并陳述理由。
要點提示：

減肥趨勢	減肥已成為當今女性的一種時尚
減肥方法	節食，運動，藥物，手術
減肥產品	減肥藥、減肥茶、減肥器械
減肥效果	效果不一，有的甚至帶來副作用
你的看法及理由……

注意：1. 詞數：120左右；2. 開頭和結尾已經給出，不計入總詞數；3. 可適當發揮，使行文連貫；4. 參考詞匯：器械 equipment。
Dear Editor,
I’m Li Hua, a student in a high school.
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Best wishes!
Yours
Li Hua

Answer 1

Dear Editor,
I’m Li Hua, a student in a high school.
Nowadays, losing weight has become popular among young and middle-aged women. In order to make themselves pretty, they try to use different ways to lose weight. Some go on a diet, some take exercise, some take medicines, and others even turn to operations for help. As a result, lots of products have been made for losing weight. Special medicine, tea and equipment are provided in the market, which are used in different ways and work differently, but some have side effects.
In my opinion, it is understandable that women seek beauty but they should do it in a proper way. Eating a balanced diet and taking more exercise are the ways that I most support, as the other ways are likely to do harm to people’s health more or less.
Best wishes!
                    Yours,
                                                             Li Hua

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