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《中學生》英語雜志“熱點”專欄2012年第2期的討論話題為“中學生是否該做兼職”，你對該話題很感興趣，并在班中進行了一次問卷調查。現在你寫信向該欄目投稿，介紹本次問卷調查的大致結果。信中包括如下要點：

(1)你班中同學做兼職的情況：全班62個學生中有近三分之二的人曾經或正在從事餐館服務員、商店店員或圖書管理員等工作；

(2)這些同學選擇做兼職的原因：約一半的學生是為了幫助解決貧困家庭孩子經濟問題；另外一些人認為可以學以致用并豐富社會經驗；

(3)其他同學不做兼職工作的主要原因：高三學習壓力太大，沒有時間；兼職工作報酬低，或是父母不允許。

Dear Editor,

I’m writing to tell you the result of a survey I have done among my classmates on whether middle school students should do part-time jobs as it has also been a hot topic among us students．

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Yours sincerely,

Yang Li

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Dear Editor, I’m writing to tell you the result of a survey I have done among my classmates on whether middle school students should do part-time jobs as it has also been a hot topic among us students．Nearly two-thirds of my 62 classmates has ever done or are doing part-time jobs, working as shop assistants, waiters in fast food restaurants or librarians．About half of them take up part-time jobs to help solve financial problems for their families．Others give up their leisure time because the jobs provide them with good chances to enrich their social experience and put what they have learned in class into practice．The other students do not do part-time jobs because under great pressure, students of senior three can not afford the time for the jobs which are poorly paid．Besides, their parents wouldn’t allow them to do that． Yours sincerely, Yang Li