Question

通過在班級內進行調查，我們發現很多同學在生活和飲食方面都存在一些影響健康的習慣，請你根據下面提示以Form a Good Living Habit為題寫一篇短文。

現象：一些同學不吃早飯，課間吃一些零食(snacks)充饑；不喜歡吃蔬菜而喜歡吃一些高熱量的食物，平常也缺乏鍛煉。

結果：有些同學體重開始增加，不時出現一些健康問題。

建議：要養成有規律的生活習慣，按時吃早飯，多吃些健康食品，并加強鍛煉。

說明：1、文章開頭已給出，不記入總詞數。

2、100字左右。

Form a Good Living Habit

Through the survey we find that                                              

                                                                             

                                                                              

 

Answer 1

【答案】

Form a Good Living Habit

Through the survey we find that many students have some bad habits in life and diet. For example, some students don’t eat breakfast . When they feel hungry, they eat some snacks between classes. And also some others don’t like to eat vegetables but enjoy eating the kind of food rich in calories. What’s worse they did not do enough exercise. As a result many of them begin to gain weight and often have some health problems.

In order to keep healthy, therefore, we should realize the importance of healthy diet and try to develop good living habits. It will benefit us to eat breakfast on time and have more healthy food. Besides, we should also take more exercise.

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇提綱類作文，我們需要用正確的英語把給出的要點表達出來.本作文中給出的要點比較具體,故需要準確表達.寫作時注意準確運用時態，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關系，盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時也要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次。特別注意在選擇句式時要賦予變化。

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