Question

假設你是李華，你的美國朋友Peter來信詢問你們的學習情況。請你根據以下提供的信息，寫一封100字左右的回信，談談自從你校實行新課改以來，嘗試新的學習方法，你們學習情況的變化。電子郵件的格式已為你寫好。
過去: 老師滿堂灌 ，學生忙于做筆記；晚上加班做作業。
現在: 小組討論，自主學習；活動形式多樣。
Dear Peter,
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Yours,
Li Hua

Answer 1

Dear Peter,
I’m glad to hear from you again. There are many things going on in our school. To our delight, things have got much better since we started a different way of learning.
In the past, our teachers stood in front of the class talking all the time while we students listened, busily taking notes. After a tiring day at school, we always had a lot of homework to do. Sometimes we even worked late into the night. Now we are active in class. We often have discussions in pairs or in groups. After class, we enjoy all kinds of activities, such as going in for sports, doing experiments, or surfing the Internet. 
We are extremely happy about the changes in our studies.  
All the best
Yours
Li Hua

試題分析：本文是提綱類作文，要求寫信給Peter，介紹自從你校實行新課改以來，嘗試新的學習方法，你們學習情況的變化，文章的要點也基本上都給出來了，而且很具體，考生要把要點解釋清楚，不能有遺漏。在寫作的過程中，要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型，如強調句，倒裝句等，讓文章更上檔次。同時在列舉措施的時候要使用合適的連接詞如：First，second， Besides, What’s more等，讓文章看起來很有條理，也很流暢。本篇文章在寫作時不要啰嗦，力求簡潔的表達自己的觀點。
【亮點說明】所給范文語言簡潔，使用常用的短語：To our delight,使我們高興的是，late into the night. 到深夜，in pairs 成對的，go in for參加，還有范文充分體現高中教材中的重點語法和句式： There are many things going on in our school. 這句話用了現在分詞做定語， In the past, our teachers stood in front of the class talking all the time while we students listened, busily taking notes. 這句話用了while表示對比，和現在分詞，After a tiring day at school, we always had a lot of homework to do.這句話用了不定式。