Question

請仔細觀察以下三幅連環圖片的內容，并想象第四幅圖片可能的發展，寫出一個涵蓋連環圖片內容并有完整結局的故事。

注意：? 1．詞數不少于80；

??????? 2．開頭已給出，不計入總詞數；

??????? 3．可適當增加細節，以使行文連貫；

??????? 4．在答題卡上作答。

??? Tom’s mother，Mary，a kind and hardworking mother，runs a noodle restaurant．

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Answer 1

【答案】

Tom’s? mother Mary runs a noodle restaurant .One afternoon, Tom was doing his homework on the counter in the restaurant when a customer came for a bowl of noodles , Obviously he was in a hurry for he left his bag behind as he left the train station.

Tom noticed the bag. Opening? the bag, they found ,to their surprise, that I was full of cash in bundles. They had only seen criminals do that making illegal deals on TV。

At the train station , our hasty customer was panic-stricken. His face covered with sweat, he tried very hard to recall where he had left his bag of money.

Finally he traced back to Mary’s? noodle restaurant. The minute be stepped in, he saw cops awaiting him at the counter. Damn ,He turned around to run, but it was too late. The cops arrested him, Now he had to think of a very good reason to explain what the money was for.

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇看圖寫作，有三幅連環圖片，并要求想象第四幅圖片可能的發展，寫出一個涵蓋連環圖片內容并有完整結局的故事。1. 認真讀圖，2. 初步構思，考慮用詞、短語、句型和時態。3. 連詞成句，然后再連句成文。盡可能地充分利用所學的短語或句型來表述具體的內容。4. 反復審核，修改錯誤。5. 注意所給的漢語提示。一般說來，看圖寫話中的漢語提示往往給定了有關的時間、地點、人物等相關的信息，還有參考詞匯都是有用信息。在把握了文章的中心后，應在內心構思一個基本的框架，并考慮使用恰當的詞語、短語和句型，以充分地表達文章的內容。這是體現自身能力的重要一環。然后再將各圖的單個句子串連起來。串連時，要注意使用適當的連接詞語或過渡性語句，不至于讓讀者覺得文章中出現跳躍現象，更使上下文更為緊湊、自然。

【亮點說明】文中使用了非常好的短語和句子為文章增色不少，in a hurry匆忙的，turn around轉身， Opening? the bag, they found ,to their surprise, that I was full of cash in bundles. 這句話用了現在分詞做狀語， His face covered with sweat, he tried very hard to recall where he had left his bag of money.這句話用了獨立主格結構和賓語從句， The minute be stepped in, he saw cops awaiting him at the counter. 這句話用了the minute做連詞， Now he had to think of a very good reason to explain what the money was for.這句話用了賓語從句。

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