Question

在學校，對于我們學生來說，與老師建立良好的關系非常重要。請就“師生關系”這一主題用英語寫一篇120詞左右的短文，談談你的看法，內容包括：
1. 良好的師生關系的重要性；
2. 怎樣培養良好的師生關系。
注意：可適當發展，以使行文連貫。

Answer 1

Good relationships between our teachers and us play an important part in our study and life. Only with good relationships can our teachers achieve the desired teaching effect, and can we do well in our studies.
This ideal relationship depends on mutual effort. One the one hand, we should respect our teachers and their efforts paid to us. We should be ready to follow their practical advice. On the other hand, our teachers should not only be kind, friendly and patient to us, but also treat each student fairly and equally. They must be responsible for their teaching and ready to help us when we are in trouble. In a word, if teachers and we are willing to do their best, the relationship between us will be quite beneficial.

試題分析：作文為一篇材料作文，就內容來講包括兩個方面的問題，一是良好的師生關系的重要性，對我們，對老師有什么作用。二是培養良好的師生關系的方式，有哪些方法來培養良好的師生關系。所以重要性所占比重要少于建立師生關系的方法。主次要分明。
【亮點說明】我們可以借鑒文章的好的方面，一是文章的開篇點題，緊扣中心，就內容而言，主次得當。第二方面是句式變換豐富，文中使用了較復雜的句型結構，使文章語言豐富，例如Only with good relationships can our teachers achieve the desired teaching effect, and can we do well in our studies. 倒裝句的使用以及not only---but also ----復雜的結構。
考點: 考查學生語言的綜合運用能力