Question

7．下面短文中有10處語言錯誤，請在有錯誤的地方增加、刪除或修改某個單詞．
增加：在缺詞處加一個漏詞符號（∧），并在其下面寫上該加的詞．
刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（﹨）劃掉．
修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫上修改后的詞．
注意：
1．每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；
2．只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計分．
As a senior three student，it won't take long after I graduate．Now，I have much to share with my fellow student．
Firstly，I'd like to show my appreciation to those stand by me all the way，teachers，parents and friends included．Without their help and advice，my life will be different．Secondly，it's high time for I to say sorry to the classmates whom I hurt or misunderstand．I firm believe that communication and smiles act as bridges to friendship．Thirdly，I've made up my mind to make every effort to study，so hard work is the key to a success．Finally I want to express my hope which all the younger fellows can make full use of time，because time and tide wait for no man．

Answer 1

分析 作為一名高三的學生，我不久就要畢業了．想和同學們分享一下我的感受．首先我要感謝那些一直支持我的同學，老師，父母和朋友．我還要向那些我傷害或誤解過的同學道歉．最后我要努力學習，希望我的學弟學妹們也要充分利用時間，歲月不待人啊．

解答 As a senior three student，it won't take long after I graduate．Now，I have much to share with my fellow student．
                                                                   before                                                                                students
Firstly，I'd like to show my appreciation to those∧stand by me all the way，teachers，parents 
                                                                     加who或改stand為standing
and friends included．Without their help and advice，my life will be different．Secondly，it's high  
                                                                                         would                            
time for I to say sorry to the classmates whom I hurt or misunderstand．I firm believe that 
           me                                                                   misunderstood   firmly
communication and smiles act as bridges to friendship．Thirdly，I've made up my mind to make 
                                                        
every effort to study，so hard work is the key to a success．Finally I want to express my hope which
                           as/for/because                         去掉                                                              that
all the younger fellows can make full use of time，because time and tide wait for no man．
1．after改為before．句意表達的不久就畢業了，句型是：it will+時間段+before多長時間后就…
2．student改為students．句意表達的是我的同學們，要用復數．
3．加who或改stand為standing．題干中I'd like to show my appreciation to those是一個完整的句子，后面要么用定語從句，要么用非謂語動詞．
4．will改為would．題干中Without their help and advice表達的是虛擬條件，主句中要用would加動詞原形．
5．I改為me． 題干中I是用來作介詞for的賓語，要用賓格．
6．misunderstand改為misundersstood．句意講述的是我過去誤會過的同學，要用一般過去時態．
7．firm改為firmly．修飾動詞要用副詞．
8．so改為as/for/because．句意表達的原因，so后接的是結果．
9．a去掉．題干中success表達的是抽象概念，不用冠詞．
10．which改為that．題干中all the younger fellows can make full use of time是解釋hope的內容，是同位語從句，要用that來引導．

點評 短文改錯題考查的是語境理解能力和用法基礎知識．�？嫉闹�識點有：名詞（單復數錯誤），動詞（時態，語態，搭配，轉換），代詞（指代錯誤），形容詞和副詞（轉換，比較等級），連詞（and，but，or）等．偶爾也會考查邏輯錯誤，如本來用her，卻用了his等等．解題是要注意：以句子為單位，以動詞為中心．看句子要看完整，避免句子前后矛盾的錯誤；找錯誤要以動詞為主，動詞或與動詞有關的錯誤占了改錯的題的重要一部分．