Question

假如你是美國的Mike，你的朋友張平打算到國外留學，他寫信詢問你什么樣的中國學生最受國外高校青睞。請你根據下列要點給對方寫一封回信：
1. 語言能力是基礎
2. 適應能力很重要
3. 興趣愛好被看重
4. 要有社會責任感
注意：詞數100左右。
Dear Zhang Ping,
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Yours,
Mike

Answer 1

Dear Zhang Ping,
I’m glad to hear that you want to study abroad in your letter. Here is what I know about what kind of Chinese students are favored in foreign colleges and universities.
As far as I know, the language ability is essential, which helps you communicate with others and makes it easier for you to understand the courses. Besides, you should have the ability to adapt quickly to the new environment. What’s more, your interest is valued as well, for it has a lot to do with success. Last but not the least, those who are willing to shoulder social responsibility are especially respected and welcomed.
This is some of my advice, and I hope it can be of some help to you. May you succeed! Best wishes and good luck.
Yours，
Mike

試題分析：本文是一篇書信，屬于提綱類作文。文章給出了簡單的中文提示，給學生留下了很大自由發揮的空間，有益于考查考生的能力。成文時要注意：1.文章內容要齊全；（1）語言能力是基礎；（2）適應能力很重要；（3）興趣愛好被看重；（4）要有社會責任感。2.時態：用一般現在時；3.人稱：以第一人稱為主；4.適當使用一些高級詞匯、短語及高級句式，以提高文章的檔次；5.恰當使用一些連詞和插入語，使文章流暢，自然。
【亮點說明】使用從句高級句型：As far as I know, the language ability is essential, which helps you communicate with others and makes it easier for you to understand the courses. Last but not the least, those who are willing to shoulder social responsibility are especially respected and welcomed. 使用連詞和插入語：As far as I know, Besides, What’s more, Last but not the least,高級詞匯：essential，responsibility等。