Question

書面表達（滿分25分）
根據下面提示與要求，請以 “Animal In Danger” 為題， 寫一篇100—120 詞的英文短文。 簡單說明原因，并就動物保護措施提出建議。
1．污染使許多動物生存的環境遭到破壞。
2．亂砍亂伐使許多動物失去家園。
3．許多動物被過度捕殺而瀕臨滅絕。
4．針對以上的原因提出動物保護措施。

Answer 1

As we know, a lot of animals are in danger now. Air and water are being polluted so that the environment in which animals live are destroyed. Besides, many trees are being cut down, making many animals lose their homes. What’s worse, many animals are over hunted for money and are being killed without mercy so that some of them are in danger of dying out.
In my opinion, something must be done now. Firstly, natural reserves should be set up to protect the animals. Secondly, all the illegal hunting should be punished. Thirdly, people should be made aware of the importance of environmental protection. Only in this way can we save the animals. To save the animals is to save ourselves.

試題分析：對于本文的寫作，可以分兩段進行。首先對動物瀕臨滅絕的原因，即污染是生存環境遭到破壞、亂砍亂伐現象、過度捕殺進行闡述，分三層意思進行平行或是遞進式的表達，以顯出文章的層次感。第二段提出動物保護的措施，對于此部分的寫作同樣要注意條理清晰，句式富于變化。最后進行總結，說出保護動物的重大意義。
點評：書面表達是最能體現一個學生的語言運用能力和英語思維理解的題目，議論文的寫作一般采用經典的二段或三段式進行行文，議論文是比較容易寫的文體。對于表達內容層次時需要使用平時積累的層次關系的短語，多使用被動，倒裝、虛擬來提升作文的美度。在平時寫作時應該多進行閱讀，對閱讀過程中寫的好的表達要進行積累，并且學以致用，勤積累，多背誦，這樣才能作文才能穩步的提升。