Question

【寫作內容】
Health Magazine做了一項調查，了解到現在人們的健康狀況在下滑，主要原因如下：
1．工作忙碌，壓力過大，缺少鍛煉；
2．生活沒有規律，熬夜，休息不夠；
3．不少人有抽煙、喝酒的習慣，
4. 對空氣、水和食品的污染加��；
5．建議：適時放松，多運動，培養良好的生活習慣，戒煙，戒酒，保護環境。
【寫作要求】只能使用5個句子表達全部內容。

Answer 1

According to the survey made by Health Magazine, compared with the past, people are in poorer health. One of the main reasons is that people are living a busy life without taking enough exercise and suffer lots of stress. Besides, many people  lead an irregular life, stay up late at night or do not have enough rest. Worse still, a number of people have got into the habit of smoking and drinking alcohol, and the pollution to the air, water and food has got more serious. To change this situation, we should relax at a proper time, do more sports, form a good living habit, keep away from cigarette and alcohol and protect the environment.

試題分析：考生首先要仔細審題，包括以下幾個方面：（1）層次結構，（2）句子的時態（3）內容要點。尤其是內容要點要把握準確到位，這是半開放性作文，要點需要考生拿捏準確以及正確，這加大了寫作難度。再者考生要注意盡可能使句子的表達形式多樣化，適當的使用一些高級句式和高級詞匯，以提高書面表達的檔次和可讀性。因為只能使用5個句子表達全部的內容。又要包括所有的要點，考生要多使用復雜句，一句話中多包含些信息，如范文里面的句子：a number of people have got into the habit of smoking and drinking alcohol, and the pollution to the air, water and food has got more serious.就包含了幾個要點內容。
點評：作文要層次清晰，要點全面，表達流暢，切合作文要求，句子結構準確，信息內容完整，篇章結構連貫。文中使用一些極佳的詞語和句子為文章增色，使用高級詞匯及句型。