Question

假設今年暑假你將去參加學校組織的夏令營活動。學校組織你們去英國倫敦。

活動內容：

1.與那兒的中學老師和學生交流，了解他們的生活和學習情況；

2.參觀大英博物館，了解當地的歷史和文化；去英國家庭就餐，學做甜品（dessert），以便于回國后與家人、朋友分享；

3.去英國的農村，感受大自然。

[寫作要求] 

只能用5個句子表達全部內容。

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Answer 1

【答案】

This summer holiday, I will take part in the summer camp to London, Britain, organized by our school. We will be given a chance to communicate with the British secondary school teachers and students, so that we can know about their lives and studies. We will have a visit to the British Museum to learn about its local culture and history. We will also have a chance to go the British family to have dinner with them and learn how to make dessert, which I can make to entertain my family and friends after coming back to China. In addition, we will go to the countryside of Britain, enjoying the beautiful natural scenery.

【解析】

試題分析：考查提綱作文：考生首先要仔細審題，包括以下幾個方面：（1）層次結構，（2）句子的時態（3）內容要點。尤其是內容要點要把握準確到位，這是提綱作文，要點需要考生拿捏準確以及正確，考生要注意盡可能使句子的表達形式多樣化，適當的使用一些高級句式和高級詞匯，以提高書面表達的檔次和可讀性。因為只能使用5個句子表達全部的內容。又要包括所有的要點，考生要多使用復雜句，一句話中多包含些信息。

【亮點說明】This summer holiday, I will take part in the summer camp to London, Britain, organized by our school. 這句話用的是過去分詞做定語，We will be given a chance to communicate with the British secondary school teachers and students, so that we can know about their lives and studies. 這句話是目的狀語從句， We will also have a chance to go the British family to have dinner with them and learn how to make dessert, which I can make to entertain my family and friends after coming back to China.這句話用的是非限制性定語從句，In addition, we will go to the countryside of Britain, enjoying the beautiful natural scenery. 這句話是用可現在分詞做狀語。

考點：考查提綱式作文