Dear friends，,
I am Li Hua.1t’s a great pleasure for me to be here today and share my experience of learning English with you . I'm interested in English , and hope to be an interpreter in the future . Naturally it’s very important for me to learn English well . As everybody knows vocabulary is an important part of language , just like bricks in a building . I usually memorize twenty new words a day and put them to use whenever possible . After class，I often listen to English programs on TV and on the radio . Besides , I've learned a lot from the Internet and other sources.
Now , I'd like to make some suggestions on English teaching and learning in our school . Firstly , we should be given more opportunities to use what we’ve learned in order to have a better grasp of it . Secondly ,I hope our teachers can recommend more interesting books and magazines and give us more free time to read them . Finally ，1 suggest we have more English activities，such as English contests and festivals .
Thank you for listening .
試題分析：這是一篇提綱類作文，我們需要用正確的英語把給出的要點表達出來.本作文中給出的要點比較具體,故需要準確表達.寫作時注意準確運用時態，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關系，盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時也要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次。特別注意在選擇句式時要賦予變化。
點評：本文屬于提綱類作文，動筆前，一定要認真分析要點，理解要點要表達的含義，不能遺漏要點，跑題偏題。平時除了加強詞匯積累，寫作聯系以外，還可以適當記憶一些類似的范文，這樣在考試中可以起到事半功倍的效果。
