Question

當今社會人們的心理問題越來越引人關注。以下是我校高二級學生在心理健康的研究學習中做的結題報告提綱。請據此寫一篇英文版的心理健康問題結題報告。

現狀	每四個人就有一個一生中會有心理健康問題，它會導致各種疾病。
原因	成年人：工作壓力、子女教育；學生：學習壓力。
解決辦法	找到問題根源；放松自己，如參加運動、娛樂活動、交友；咨詢心理醫生。

【寫作要求】
1. 語言規范，內容合適，篇章連貫。
2. 詞數120左右。
3. 參考詞匯：心理健康問題 psychological problem

Answer 1

One in four people will experience some kind of psychological problem during his or her life. When they fail to deal with these problems, they are likely to lead to various illnesses.
The causes of mental health problems often vary greatly. Nowadays, a good number of people in the society are suffering from heavy pressure. Most adults’ pressure is due to the stress of work or the worry about their children’s education while many adolescents are also troubled by the pressure coming from their study.
Fortunately, there’re a lot of ways to cure the mental problems. Firstly, find the real cause of your psychological problem and see whether you can solve it thoroughly. Secondly, do something to relax yourself, such as having sports, taking part in some entertainments or making some friends. Finally, do not hesitate to turn to your psychological consultant if you find all the above methods not effective.

試題分析：考查提綱類書面表達的寫作。要點都已經給出，根據要點寫一篇關于心理健康問題的結題報告，要點包括：現狀，原因，解決辦法，具體內容表格中都已經給出來了，寫作時要把要點都包括進去，不要有遺漏，審題時注意本文使用的時態，運用合適的語法規則和詞匯把各要點都準確表述出。難點在于選擇詞匯和句型，可以靈活運用省略句，倒裝句和強調句型準確表述。如范文里面的Most adults’ pressure is due to the stress of work or the worry about their children’s education while many adolescents are also troubled by the pressure coming from their study.還有要用適當的關聯詞把文章串聯起來：Fortunately, Firstly, Secondly, Finally,等等。
點評：提綱類短文的關鍵在于要點要全面包括，不能有遺漏和省略。同時注意謀篇布局的順序，詞匯句型的選用，運用合適的連接詞連接全文，同時選擇高級的詞匯和語法項目讓文章更有文采。