Question

假定你是高三學生李華，看到同學們互贈紙質新年賀卡，認為這會造成浪費和污染。請你根據下列要點寫一篇100詞左右的英語短文向校英語報投稿，建議大家使用電子賀卡（e-cards）。
1．方便快捷：電子郵件傳送：      2．省錢：網站免費下載；
3．內容非富：可增加音樂動畫：    4．環保：不會造成污染浪費。
參考詞匯： 動畫animation
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Answer 1

One possible version
New Year’s Day is drawing near and as usual many of my classmates begin to send paper cards to each other, friends and family. I think it is really a waste of money and it can also cause pollution. So I suggest using e-cards instead of paper-cards. First, it is very convenient to send e-cards. It just takes a click and our friends will receive them in one or two seconds. Second, free e-cards can help us save money. Third, with sound and animation, e-cards are more interesting and lively than paper cards. Last but not least, e-cards are environmentally friendly as no real materials are used. Since they have so many advantages, why not have a try?

試題分析：本文是一篇給出漢語提示的提綱類作文。成文時應注意以下幾點：1、文章內容要齊全；（1）方便快捷：電子郵件傳送；（2）省錢：網站免費下載；（3）內容非富：可增加音樂動畫；（4）環保：不會造成污染浪費。2.時態：一般現在時；3.人稱：一、三人稱；4.適當使用一些高級詞匯、句型和短語，以提高文章的檔次；5.恰當使用一些連詞和插入語使文章自然、流暢。
【范文亮點】1.使用了高級詞匯：environmentally，短語Last but not least  2.高級句型：with sound and animation, e-cards are more interesting and lively than paper cards. it is very convenient to send e-cards