Question

假如你是Ms Wang，你的學生李華給你寫了封信，訴說他無法融入班集體及交友的苦惱，請你根據以下要點給他回一封建議信。
1. 積極參加班級活動；2. 了解同學們的興趣愛好； 3. 樂于助人
注意：1. 詞數100左右；2. 可適當增加細節，使行文連貫；3. 信的開頭和結尾已經給出，不計入總詞數。
Dear Li Hua,
I’m sorry you are having trouble in making friends. However, the situation is easy to change if you take my advice. Here are some tips to help you.
                                                                      
                                                                      
Yours, Ms Wang

Answer 1

Dear Li Hua,
I’m sorry you are having trouble in making friends. However, the situation is easy to change if you take my advice. Here are some tips to help you.
Firstly, why not take an active part in discussion? If you do this, you can express your own opinions, and at the same time, learn to other people’s views.
Secondly， you should learn about your classmates’ likes and dislikes. Then you can find common interests with them. In this way, you can get to know more different people and show them that you are friendly.
Last but not least, it’s a good idea to be ready to help others in need. That way your classmates will like making friends with you and you’ll enjoy your school life together.
I hope you will find these suggestions useful.
Yours,
Ms Wang

試題分析：考查應用文中的書信的寫作。你的學生李華給你寫了封信，訴說他無法融入班集體及交友的苦惱，請你根據以下要點給他回一封建議信。要點都已經給出，書信類短文的關鍵在于要點要全面包括，不能有遺漏和省略。描述要盡量選擇簡潔的語言，運用合適的語法規則和詞匯把各要點都準確表述出。難點在于選擇詞匯和句型，可以靈活運用高級詞匯和固定短語準確表述。同時注意謀篇布局的順序，運用合適的連接詞連接全文。
【亮點說明】If you do this, you can express your own opinions, and at the same time, learn to other people’s views.這句話用了if引導的條件狀語從句， In this way, you can get to know more different people and show them that you are friendly.這句話用了賓語從句， it’s a good idea to be ready to help others in need.這句話用了it做形式主語，還有范文使用了Firstly,  Secondly，Last but not least,這樣的關聯詞使文章更加連貫。