Question

隨著社會對“富二代”各方面負面新聞不斷的報道。最近你校學生就“金錢是否能帶來幸�！� 這一話題進行了一場激烈的辯論，辯論的結果如下表所示：

正方	反方
錢非常重要，生活離不開錢； 錢可以幫助我們解決很多問題 錢使我們的生活更舒適。	金錢不是萬能的； 金錢買不到幸福和健康； 過分在乎金錢就會失去人生的意義

請根據以上素材為某英語報刊寫一篇英語稿件，介紹這次辯論的內容，并談談我們應該如何看待金錢。
注意：1.詞數 100 左右
2.開頭已給出，但不計入總詞數；
3.不要逐條翻譯，可適當發揮，以行文連貫。
Recently we have had a discussion about whether money can bring us happiness.
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Answer 1

Recently we have had a discussion about whether money can bring us happiness. Different students have different opinions.
Some students think that money is so important that we couldn’t survive without money. Besides, money can help us to solve many problems in life. In addition , it is money that allows us to live a comfortable life.
Others, however, have opposite opinion. They think money doesn’t mean everything. For example, money cannot buy happiness or health. If we attach too much importance to money, we cannot find the real meaning of life, and nor can we find pleasure in life.
Personally, we should not regard money as everything. Money is just a tool that helps us to get what we need. We should use it wisely and properly. Only in this way can we enjoy life to the fullest.

試題分析：本書面表達是一篇議論文方面的寫作，議論性作文的結構：1. 開門見山地點明所要闡述的內容。2. 分析不同的觀點：可采用分類式或對比式，并闡明理由。要注意層次清楚條理清晰。3. 歸納總結或發表評論�？忌�在寫作之前必修認真審題，首先要注意文章的時態。不能根據材料逐字逐句的翻譯應該注意句子的銜接，以提高作文的檔次。
【亮點說明】文中使用了非常好的短語和句子為文章增色不少，比如help sb. do，allow sb to do，live a … life，for example, attach … to …，in this way；還運用句型nor引導的部分倒裝句，only放句首引導的倒裝結構等等。并注意了句子的銜接如：besides, in addition, however, for example, personally等等。