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共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處．每處錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改．
增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（∧），并在其下面寫出該加的詞．
刪除：把多余的詞用（\）劃掉．
修改：在錯的詞下畫一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞．
注意：1．每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；
2．只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計分．
A boy lived near the Changjiang River was scolded by his parents on last Sunday．
Surprising，he didn't go to school on Monday．Instead，he took a bus to Chongqing，in
that he secretly slipped into a boat，sleeping all the way．The next morning he found him in Yichang．A lorry driver gives him a lift and something to eat．After visiting a few place of interest near Yidu，he stopped a car，which did not take him to Yidu and to Dangyang．
There he was picked up by a policeman and sent home by local government．How exciting
and grateful his parents were to meet him!

分析 本文主要講述了一個男孩因為受到了父母的責備，所以選擇了逃學并且離家出走的故事．男孩先是坐上了去重慶的公共汽車，然后又偷偷地溜到一條船上，睡了一路，第二天早上，醒來后發現自己到了宜昌．一位卡車司機讓他搭了便車，還給了他一些吃的，后來他還參觀了宜都附近的一些旅游勝地．最后在警察和當地政府的幫助下，他被送回了家．

解答 答案：
A boy lived near the Changjiang River was scolded by his parents on last Sunday．
 living或前加who或that                                                          去掉on                                                        
Surprising，he didn't go  to school on Monday．Instead，he took a bus to Chongqing，in that he
 Surprisingly                                                                                                                which
 slipped into a boat，sleeping all the way．The next morning he found him in Yichang．A lorry driver gives 
                                                                                                     himself                                     gave 
him a lift and something to eat．After visiting a few place of interest near Yidu，he stopped a car，
                                                                              places
which did not take him to Yidu and to Dangyang．There he was picked up by a policeman and sent home
                                               but   
 by∧local government．How excitingand grateful his parents were to meet him!
   the                                   excited
1  把lived改為living或在它的前加who或that    考查定語的用法   此處"…near the Changjiang"在句中作后置定語修飾名詞A boy，由于A boy 與動詞live構成主謂關系，故用動詞的現在分詞形式即living；或者可以在lived之前加關系代詞who或that，用定語從句來修飾先行詞A boy 
2  去掉on   考查介詞的用法     星期的名稱前如有last，this，next等詞，在這些詞的前面應省略介詞，故應去掉on
3  把surprising改為Surprisingly     考查副詞的用法   此處用來修飾整個句子，表明說話人的看法；意為"令人吃驚的是"；故用副詞Surprisingly
4  把that改為which    考查關系代詞的用法     在定語從句中，that不能用于"介詞+關系代詞"的結構中，其中的關系代詞可以是whom或which，由于本句的先行詞Chongqing是地名，故填which
5  把him改為himself    考查反身代詞的用法    根據語境可知，此處指的應是他自己，意為：第二天早上，他發現自己在宜昌；故用himself 
6  把gives改為gave    考查時態    根據上文的時間"on Monday"以及"The next morning"可知，此處應是發生在星期二的事情，故用一般過去時
7  把place改為places   考查名詞的單復數   由于此處是用在a few （一些）之后的可數名詞；故用名詞的復數形式
8  把and改為but      考查連詞的用法     此處的"not…but…"意為"不是…而是…"；本句的意思是：他攔下了一輛車，這輛車沒帶他去宜都而是去了當陽
9   在local前加the   考查定冠詞的用法    此處用在名詞短語之前，特指當地的政府；故添加the
10  把exciting改為excited   考查形容詞的用法    此處用來修飾人（his parents）；故 用由過去分詞轉化來形容詞

點評 短文改錯是集語法知識與語言技能為一體的綜合性試題，主要考查學生對詞匯、語法和語篇三要素的把握能力．錯誤類型一般有：缺詞、多詞和錯詞．常見的錯誤有：1 詞法錯誤，主要包括動詞、名詞、冠詞、形容詞、副詞、代詞和介詞等詞類誤用、同義詞混淆使用、固定搭配等方面．解答此類試題時，需要正確分析句子成分，熟練掌握各詞類的用法以及掌握一些固定搭配等．2 常見句法錯誤．通常表現為簡單句、復合句以及疑問句、祈使句、感嘆句和強調句等錯誤．解答此類試題時，需要掌握各類句子的句式結構及意義用法．3 應在理解文章大意的前提下，進行作答．

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