Question

中國人不善于向家人表達“愛”，但你認為告訴家人你愛他們很重要。請以“Ways to express love to my family”為題，寫出如何向家人表達“愛”。
提示：1．如果父母生日，當面向他們說“我愛你們”‘
2．經常幫助家人做家務；
3．經常擁抱父母；
4．你自己的看法。
注意：1．詞數120左右；
2．可以適當增加細節，以使行文連貫。
Ways to express love to my family
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Answer 1

There are various ways to express love. I think saying “ I Love you ” on my father’s or mother’s birthday is a good way to let my parents know how I love them.
I am sure if I often help my parents do some simple housework that I can do, especially when they are tired after work, my parents must feel my love to them .
Besides, I will often give my parents a hug because I learn that people can get relaxed through a warm hug and feel connected to each other, which does good to their health.
Getting small but meaning gifts must be an exciting moment for my loved and I think I will do so on some special days.

試題分析：本文是一篇說明文。文章給出了簡單的漢語提示，文章話題貼近學生生活，讓他們有話可說。成文時應注意：1.文章內容要點要齊全；（1）如果父母生日，當面向他們說“我愛你們”（2）經常幫助家人做家務；（3）經常擁抱父母；（4）你自己的看法。2.人稱：第一人稱為主；3.時態：一般現在時；4.適當使用一些高級詞匯、短語和句型，以提高文章的檔次；5.恰當使用一些連詞和插入語，使文章表達自然、流暢。
【亮點說明】使用了從句：1.I am sure if I often help my parents do some simple housework that I can do , especially when they are tired after work , my parents must feel my love to them . 2. because I learn that people can get relaxed through a warm hug and feel connected to each other , which does good to their health .使用了動名詞短語：Getting small but meaning gifts must be an exciting moment for my loved 使用了插入語：Besides