Question

目前許多學校對學生采取封閉式管理，學生對此看法不一。請根據下表所提供的信息，寫一篇短文，談談自己的看法。

有的同學認為	有的同學認為
學校限制學生的自由 學生和社會接觸少 學生的興趣和愛好不能得到充分的發展，因此……	學校是學習知識的地方 學生應該安心在學校學習 學生缺乏自覺性，離開了老師，可能會……
你的看法……

注意：1．詞數100左右；
2.短文開頭已給出，不計人總詞數。
Nowadays a lot of schools keep their students in school all day long.                              
                                                                               
                                                                        

Answer 1

Nowadays a lot of schools keep their students in school all day long. Students have diffenent opinions about it.
Some of the students think they enjoy less freedom and have little chance to get in touch with society. They are not able to fully develop their interests and hobbies. Therefore, they have less interest in their studies.
Some others think school is the best place to get knowledge so they should put their heart into their lessons. Some students lack the ability to control themselves. Once out of school, they may lose control of themselves and do something that will influence their studies.
Personally, it is necessary to keep students at school. But at the same time schools should organize various activities so that students can enjoy their school life. I don’t agree to keep students at school all day. Schools should offer students more free time to develop their personal interests.

試題分析：本文屬于陳述正反方觀點的議論文作文，主題是對學校對采取封閉式管理學生的不同觀點，題目給出了大部分要點，也要考生給出自己的觀點。文章結構清晰，先是一些同學反對的觀點，然后贊同的觀點，最后是自己的觀點，要求考生用地道的英語表達自己的觀點，要求觀點明確，駕馭語言的能力強，選擇詞匯的時候要選擇相對高級的詞匯，也要運用多種句型，讓文章更有變化。難度在于選擇合適的詞匯和句型表達文章需要的意思，可以變換使用一些容易駕馭的句子或者詞匯實現同樣的目的。在寫作的時候要運用合適的連接詞把要點串聯起來，使文章成為一個整體。
點評：本文屬于正反方觀點作文，但是要點給出的比較全，只需要考生表達清楚，還有自己的觀點。在寫作的時候要適合合適的連接詞來連接各要點，使他們成為整體。要選擇高級的詞匯和句型，讓文章有變化，有層次。