Question

請你根據以下提示，以My experience as a volunteer為題寫一篇短文給校辦刊物投稿，與讀者分享自己寒假做志愿者的經歷：
時間： 寒假期間的每個周末；
主要活動：給老人打掃房間；給老人讀文章；帶領老人鍛煉身體；
體會：給老人帶來快樂；這次經歷使自己更有愛心。
注意：
可根據內容需要適當拓展，以使行文連貫；
詞數100左右。
My experience as a volunteer

Answer 1

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My experience as a volunteer
During the winter vacation, I worked as a volunteer at a nursing home every weekend. As a volunteer, I cleaned the room for the old people in the morning. What’s more, I read articles for them, which helped them learn what was going on at home and abroad. Most of the old people were weak, so I took them to take exercise. And we played interesting games together. The old people there were satisfied with my work.
My volunteer experience has shown that I can bring joy to old people. It has made me a more caring person. In a word, my work as a volunteer is extremely rewarding!

解析試題分析：寫作時應注意(1)認真審題，確定體裁。這里是校辦刊物投稿，敘述自己以前的一次經歷。(2)構思要點。根據題目要求，理解要表達的要點．設計好文章的層次段落，考慮所用時態、人稱等，把要點串聯起來，構成文章框架。(3)選詞造句，避難選易。在要點、層次明確的情況下，選用自己最熟悉的單詞、句式進行造句．如果不會用復雜句就用簡單句表達要點．注意主謂語一致、人稱、數量、大小寫、標點。(4)認真檢查，避免錯誤。仔細閱讀全文，查找是否有錯，注意時態、單詞拼寫、字母大小寫、標點是否有誤，句式是否正確．邏輯是否一致。
考點：提綱類作文。
點評：應該注意適當增加細節以使行文連貫，比如適當選用表示因果、遞進、轉折關系的連接詞，使文章流暢、通順，并避免因反復使用句式相同的簡單句而造成的單調感。