Question

[寫作內容]
假設你是李華，你的好友Tom不善于交際，來信總是向你訴說他在交往方面的煩惱，請你就此向你的朋友提出一些提議。建議內容包括以下幾點：
1.         寬容（tolerant）
2.         多微笑
3.         和別人在一起時，不要保持沉默
[寫作要求]
1.          只能使用五個句子表達全部內容
2.          開頭結尾已給出不計入總字數
[評分標準]
句子結構準確，信息內容完整，篇章結構連貫
Dear Tom,
You often tell me about your difficulty in making friends and communicating with others. Here are my suggestions and I hope they can help.
                                                                               
                                                              
                                                                              
                                                                               
                                                                               
Best wishes,
Yours,
Li Hua

Answer 1

Dear Tom,
You often tell me about your difficulty in making friends and communicating with others. Here are my suggestions and I hope they can help.
First of all, try to be tolerant, because everyone has his or her own personalities, some of which May annoy you, but you should realize everyone is different and that your personality may also annoy others. If you think a person is so difficult to get along with, it may be just because he deals with something in a way different from yours. Secondly, smile as much as possible, which is an effective way to fill the gaps between people and is sure to bring you a lot of friends. Rather than keep silent when you are with someone, try to start a relaxing conversation with a topic that everybody has something to talk about.
Above all, being active and outgoing can help you to do better in communication.
Best wishes,
Yours,
Li Hua

試題分析：這是一篇提綱類作文，我們需要用正確的英語把給出的要點表達出來.本作文中給出的要點比較具體,故需要準確表達.寫作時注意準確運用時態，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關系，盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時也要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次。特別注意在選擇句式時要賦予變化。
點評：本文屬于提綱類作文，動筆前，一定要認真分析要點，理解要點要表達的含義，不能遺漏要點，跑題偏題。平時除了加強詞匯積累，寫作聯系以外，還可以適當記憶一些類似的范文，這樣在考試中可以起到事半功倍的效果。