Question

第二節：寫作（滿分30分）
隨著全球環境的惡化，越來越多的人選擇過“低碳生活（low-carbon life）”，即減少二氧化碳的排放，低能量、低消耗、低開支的生活。請寫一篇英文倡議書，倡議你的同學們加入“低碳一族”，為環保做出貢獻。提示要點如下：
1.用手洗衣服；
2.多走樓梯，少用電梯；
3.去超市自備購物袋；
4.步行或者騎自行車上學；
5…….
注意：
1.詞數：120-150左右。
2.可適當增加細節，以使行文連貫。

Answer 1

With the global warming getting worse, more people choose to live a low-carbon life for the purpose of reducing greenhouse gases. As students, we have the responsibility to change our lifestyle to fit the world better. The following are some small things that may lead to big improvement of the environment.
Firstly, wash your clothes by hand instead of using washing machines. Secondly, don't take elevators unless it is necessary, using stairs does good to both your health and the environment. Thirdly, remember to bring your own shopping bags when you go to the supermarket. Lastly, go to school on foot or by bicycle. Buses produce carbon, too.
Let's take action and be low-carbon people!

試題分析：這是一篇倡議書，內容具有時代性，生活性和可寫性。要求學生根據現在的情況，倡議同學們加入低碳一族。作文要包含所有中文提示，可根據主題適當發揮。該文章審題容易，學生切入容易，但要取得高分，需要有正確的句子才能明了清晰的表達作者的意思�？忌鷳�明白高考書面表達題既不是漢譯英，也不是可任意發揮的作文。它要求的是將所規定的材料內容經整理后展開思維，考查運用所學英語知識準確地表達意思的能力�？忌鷳�該用自己最熟悉、最有把握的詞、短語及句式，按一定的邏輯順序和意義層次完成短文，劃分好文章的自然段落，注意段落之間的發展和連貫。盡量使用不同長度的句子，使句型多樣化。適當使用連詞，使句子間的銜接自然流暢。
【亮點說明】With the global warming getting worse, more people choose to live a low-carbon life for the purpose of reducing greenhouse gases. 這句話是with復合結構，The following are some small things that may lead to big improvement of the environment.這句話有定語從句，don't take elevators unless it is necessary, using stairs does good to both your health and the environment.這句話有unless引導的條件狀語從句，和非謂語動詞做狀語，還有這篇文章關聯詞也比較多，如 Firstly, Secondly, Thirdly, 和Lastly,這樣文章讀起來就通順的多了。